Monday, April 30, 2007

Senor General Comrade Commissar Bumchuckles

You smell funny
Your teeth are crooked

Liar-Liar, pants on fire
Hang ‘em high on a telephone wire

Stick out your tongue
Got your nose
Lose my shoe
Show your toes

Baloney
Bologna
Hooves and lips
Crocodile tips

Cheese and crackers
Sour lip-smackers

The fickle cookie dough
Never seemed to make it to the oven
I laugh now
At the essence of being a child.

7 comments:

Unknown said...

I just though it was funny, the amount of melancholy poetry. So I wrote something kind of upbeat.

Emi Hernandez said...

That's great!

Becca said...

Very interesting. It's good.

Ali(solation) said...

It makes me laugh. And in a way it is so very creative.

RLT said...

Hey Jake I just wanted to tell you that you have a true talent and I wish I could do what you do your poems are so great.

Anonymous said...

You should know, I'm smiling now. And it feels good. And you're the cause of it.

(akw)Stretch said...

What a poem Jake.